Thursday, 13 April 2017

Special Place

Purpose: to inform
WALT describe with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
  • Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
  • Uses the present tense

Examples: Bamboo Forest / Scene Description by Dylan / Scene Description by Sophia

Writing Task: Describing a special place in London (England)

Hyde Park

As soon as I walk through the gate, I can see the tall, green trees blend in with the lovely, green grass. I see a pond with lovely ducks eating bread and seeds given by people. I can also see the playgrounds massive pirate ship, covered in people climbing all over it. As I walk  further I can see the shard and the london eye just above the trees.  In the hot, beaming sun I can see the crystal clear water going round, I can also see the people walk around the pond. As I walk in the water I can feel the water run in between my toes at the memorial fountain . I can smell dogs chasing squirrels in the park. I can hear the the dogs barking at each other.


  1. I like the big lake in your photo jake!

  2. I like the descriptive words that you've chosen to put in and i like how you described it. Ka Pia!!!